[General] telephone calls

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meela

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I received several phone calls from Nad who is living in Dubai. He needs your cell number and needs your help for some visa matter. Can I give him your cell number. He is also needed your help to establish a new company in India.

I know you and Nad were best friends. Please forgive his mistake and establish a new chapter of friendship. I want see happy both of you.

please correct me where correction is needed.
 

Tullia

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I received several phone calls from Nad who is living in Dubai. He needs your cell number and needs your help [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE]on some visa matters. Can I give him your cell number? He [STRIKE]is [/STRIKE]also need[STRIKE]ed[/STRIKE]s your help to establish a new company in India.

I know you and Nad were best friends. Please forgive his mistake and establish a new chapter of friendship. I want see [STRIKE]happy[/STRIKE] both of you happy.

Please correct me where correction is needed.

Not bad at all! Well done :)
 
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