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Daniel

Address: Shanghai Xuanhua road 113 long 12 hao 405
Phone number: 62252675
Email-address: bu_daniel@hotmail.com

Objective:
Seeking position of the assistant of market manager

Summary of Qualification:
 Proficient whit VB, Word, Excel and PowerPoint.
 Has passed CET-6, and fluency in English speaking, a little Japanese.
 Excellent skills in writing business reports and marketing analysis.

Education:
From Oct.2000 to June.2005: Shanghai university, major in international trade and economic.

Relevant course work:
Macroeconomics Microeconomics
Essentials of Econometrics Accounting
Cameralistics International Settlements
Statistics International Trade Theory
International Trade Practice Marketing
Organization Behavior Economic Laws

Work experience:
I have worked as an agency in Pacific Anta insurance company for one year from 6.2002 to 5.2003.


Cover letter
Dear sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to you for the position of commerce assistant in Mezi Mebia (shanghai) Co, LTD.
Some days ago, I found that Mezi Mebia (shanghai) Co, LTD want a commerce assistant and I am very interested in the position. I will graduate from shanghai university next year; I want to begin my career with such a challenge position. I’m sure your company will teach me much, and I will take much advantageous knowledge to your company.
I am sure that I am the right person for this position. I satisfy the job requirements you mentioned on your website. Although I am a new fresh man and lack of experience, I can fit the environment and learn from daily work soon.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,
Daniel
 

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Summary of Qualification:

Summary of Qualifications


I am writing this letter to you for the position of commerce assistant

I am writing to apply for the position...
 

Tdol

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Dear sir or Madam,

Can you spot the mistake here? ;-)
 
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