[Grammar] That means that he adds ......., if a teen looks down ...

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wotcha

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1. That means that he adds 9 to 13 kilograms of pressure to his neck if a teen looks down as he texts.

2. That means if a teen looks down as he texts, he adds 9 to 13 kilograms of pressure to his neck.


Are the both sentences grammatical?
 

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The second is much better. I'd put 'that' after 'means'.
 
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