The black-and- white photograph captured men

[Bassim]

I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct. I am not sure if my second sentence sounds natural. I meant to say that David looked at his father in the photo which was taken 30 years ago.

The black-and-white photograph captured men in snowball fight. David looked at his smiling father, 30 years younger, and couldn't believe how handsome and slim he was.

 

[teechar]

"... a snowball fight."

 

[emsr2d2]

I'd use "having a snowball fight", not "in a ...".

 

[andrewg927]

You should use "the men" if you want to talk about David and his father and not just men in general.