The book satisfied me in a way that it represented...

khurdull

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The book satisfied me in a way that it represented my feelings about right now vividly.

I was wondering if "vividly" could go together in the sentence.

Always Thank you for your help :) Have a good day.
 

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Put the adverb immediately before the verb it modifies (i.e., write "vividly represented my feelings" - though I suggest you find a different adverb).

"My feelings about right now" doesn't make sense.

Give this one another try. :)
 
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