The car hit a bump at full speed

[Bassim]

I am wondering if my sentences sound natural. Would you please correct my mistakes?

The car hit a bump at full speed and flew a few meters before landing with a crash. For a moment it almost stopped, and then it took up the speed again and vanished behind the corner, its tyres screeching squealing.

 

[jutfrank]

These are errors:

the speed
screeching squealing

 

[Bassim]

Let me try the second time.

The car hit a bump at full speed and flew a few meters before landing with a crash. For a moment it almost stopped, and then it took up speed again and vanished behind the corner, its tyres screeching and squealing.

 

[GoesStation]

I'd use a semicolon after "stopped" and remove the and that follows.

The car should vanish around the corner.