The description of the crescent moon

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piggy386

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The crescent moon featured shimmering iridescent light with a blanket of shining stars.

Does this sound alright and grammatically correct?
If not, any suggestion on how should I describe the crescent moon?

Please advise. Thanks.
 

Mister Micawber

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'The crescent moon was a shimmering iridescent light on a blanket of shining stars.'
 

piggy386

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Mister Micawber said:
'The crescent moon was a shimmering iridescent light on a blanket of shining stars.'
Thanks for the suggetion:)
 
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