Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
Please, would you take a look at these two sentences and correct my mistakes:
1. The man was talking to his fellow workers, who listened to him as if he were a Messiah.
2. They were captivated by his voice which was rising and falling, and was full of emotions.
1. The man was talking to his fellow workers, who listened to him as if he were a Messiah.
2. They were captivated by his voice which was rising and falling, and was full of emotions.
