[Grammar] The more student are exposed to history, the more of a real insight into they are

Sarah-Betty

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Could you please correct the sentence below?

The more students are exposed to history, the more of a real insight into they are give ancestors' lifestyle.
 

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Could you please correct the sentence below?

The more students are exposed to history, the more of a real insight (delete into) they have into their ancestors' lifestyle.
There are other phrases you could use (e.g. get into their, are given into their), but none of them would be very natural.
 
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The more students are exposed to history, the more of a real insight into they have into their ancestors' lifestyle.
Shouldn't the "into" be removed, as I mention it.
 

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The more the students are exposed to history, the greater an insight they would gain into their ancestor's lifestyle.

I think you mean more exposure rather than more students.
 

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The more students are exposed to history, the greater the insight they gain into their ancestors' lifestyles.
 

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The more students are exposed to history, the greater the insight they gain into their ancestors' lifestyles.
The more students are exposed to history, the more of a real insight they have into their ancestors' lifestyle.
The bold parts are such a nice combination.Thank you jutfrank and Charlie Bernstein. That was what I wanted.
 

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Is this correct as well?

The more students are exposed to history, the more of a real insight they are give into ancestors' lifestyles.​



 
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