The police raided the office of a local newspaper

Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

The police raided the office of a local newspaper and confiscated computers and other material. Upon hearing the news, journalists gathered in the street to protest in support of their colleagues, demanding immediate return of all confiscated items and material.
 
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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

The police raided the office of a local newspaper and confiscated computers and other material. Upon hearing the news, journalists gathered in the street to protest in support of their colleagues, demanding the immediate return of all confiscated items and material.

See above.
 
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