The president was greeted

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I am not sure if my sentence sounds natural, or if it is grammatically correct. Would you please correct my mistakes?

The president was greeted by the fire from sixteen guns, each represented his years in power.
 

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The president was honoured by a 16-gun salute - representing his 16 years in office.
 
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