angelsrolls
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Hello,
"The man was caught by Konya police in a raid on a house after receiving a notice about drug trafficking in Karatay’s Doğanlar neighborhood, where they seized 540 grams of cannabis found after most were burned before the raid."
Source:http://www.hurriyetdailynews.com
This sentence is a bit weird, isn't it? It sounds as if the man received the notice. I think it would be better if it were something like this:
Konya police caught the man in a raid on a house after receiving a notice [...]
Do you agree?
"The man was caught by Konya police in a raid on a house after receiving a notice about drug trafficking in Karatay’s Doğanlar neighborhood, where they seized 540 grams of cannabis found after most were burned before the raid."
Source:http://www.hurriyetdailynews.com
This sentence is a bit weird, isn't it? It sounds as if the man received the notice. I think it would be better if it were something like this:
Konya police caught the man in a raid on a house after receiving a notice [...]
Do you agree?