The well-known rock band started its tour

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Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

The well-known rock band started its tour with a free concert at an old people's home. It was its way to thank the faithful, old fans, some of who were just a few years older than the members of the band.
 

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It was [STRIKE]its[/STRIKE] their way [STRIKE]to thank[/STRIKE] of thanking the faithful, old fans, some of who were just a few years older than the members of the band.
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... some of whom ​...
 

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The comma after "faithful" doesn't belong there.
 
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