The writer's secret was revealed

Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

The writer's secret was revealed after his death and the publishing of his diaries. He mentioned in them that he had fathered a son with his cook and then paid her to keep it secret.
 
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There's an extra to in there.

Use publication.
 

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You could say "The writer's secrets were revealed when his diaries were posthumously published."
 
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