The young teacher had difficulty

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Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural.

The young teacher had difficulty in maintaining discipline in her class. When one half calmed down, another played up.
 

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When one half calmed down, the other (half) played up.

As soon as would also work well instead of When.
 

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I'd write acted up​ rather than "played up".
 

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Consider taking our the first "in". Also, I would use "one lot" instead of "one half". If you do use "one half" in a sentence, use "the other half" subsequently instead of "another half". There are only two halves. :)
I would also change "played up" to "started acting up."

[Edit: I'm getting sluggish in my middle (old?) age. Beaten to it by jutfrank and GoesStation.]
 

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I will repeat my sentence as an exercise.

The young teacher had difficulty maintaining discipline in her class. As soon as one lot calmed down, the other started acting up.
 
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