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Bassim

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Please, would you take a look at these sentences and correct my grammatical mistakes:

1. Their bodies exuded sweat, the smell of which mixed with their subtle deodorants and the scent of wild flowers.
2. He was a well-groomed man who always behaved like a gentleman.
 
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Please, would you take a look at these sentences and correct my grammatical mistakes:

1. Their bodies exuded sweat, the smell of which mixed with the aromas of their subtle deodorants and the scents of wild flowers.
2. He was a well-groomed man who always behaved like a gentleman.

In 1. above, you need to show that it's the various smells which are mixing. Different wild flowers each have different scents.
2. Looks fine to me. Some people would insert a comma after "man".
 
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