There is a curfew at my place so you can't come here.

tufguy

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When we reached that place nobody was there it was all deserted. There was a curfew.

There is a curfew at my place so you can't come here.

There has been a curfew for few days.

Please check my sentences.
 

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When we reached [STRIKE]that place[/STRIKE] Banjo Town, nobody was there. (It was [STRIKE]all[/STRIKE] completely deserted.) There was a curfew.
You had another run-on at the beginning. It's a little tautologous to say nobody was there and that it was deserted. They mean the same thing.

There is a curfew at my place so you can't come here. :tick:

There has been a curfew for a few days. Yet another missing article, tufguy.

Please check my sentences.

See above.
 
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