They don't want us to not give a damn because/, because/. Because

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eyefordetail

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They don't want us to not give a damn because then we become dangerous.

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They don't want us to not give a damn, because then we become dangerous.

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They don't want us to not give a damn. Because then we become dangerous.

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If you had numbered them, #2 would be my choice.

#1 is acceptable, #3 is definitely wrong.

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Hello

They don't want us to not give a damn because then we become dangerous.

or

They don't want us to not give a damn, because then we become dangerous.

or

They don't want us to not give a damn. Because then we become dangerous.

Many thanks.

I would go with #2. Usually we don't insert a comma before "because". But when the beginning clause is a negative, the presence or absence of the comma can change the meaning of the sentence.

See more here: 5 Calls for a Comma Before ?Because?
 
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