This is because when they know punished when they do something wrong, they will try t

[sania-baharat]

Is this sentence correct? It was written by my English teacher.
I think there is something wrong with the underlined part. It doesn't make scene.

Punishment can negatively affect children behaviors in two way. This is because when they know punished when they do something wrong, they will try to avoid telling the truth.

 

[AirbusA321]

"This is because when they get punished for doing something wrong, they will try to avoid telling the truth" would sound better to me (but I'm not one of the teachers, so better wait for what they have to say).

 

[Raymott]

Punishment can negatively affect children's behaviors in two ways.

 

[Polyester]

Is this sentence correct? It was written by my English teacher.
I think there is something wrong with the underlined part. It doesn't make scene.

Punishment can negatively affect children behaviors in two way. This is because when they know punished when they do something wrong, they will try to avoid telling the truth.

Make sense?