"those" vs "those students" vs "students"

subhajit123

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I have question related to grammar. Can I change the phrase "those who" With "Those students who" and "Students who" In the following context?

Here is the example:

1-Dear students, On 26 th December, Tuesday We have arranged a blood donation camp on the campus . Those who are intersted in donating blood may please contact John Dayal, the principal of Xyz college.

I think the phrase 'those who' can be replaced with "those students who" and "students who". If I replace it, will that be grammatical? Can any native speaker please answer this?
 

Charlie Bernstein

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I have a question related to grammar. Can I change the phrase "those who" to"Those students who" or "Students who" In the following s?

Here is the example:

1-Dear students,
(line break)
On Tuesday,
the 26(no space)th of December (or: on 26 December), we have arranged a blood donation drive on the campus . Those who are intersted in donating blood may (delete: please) contact John Dayal, the principal of ______ College.

- American English: Tuesday, the 26th of December / Tuesday, December 26th / Tuesday, December 26.
- British English: Tuesday, 26 December

I think the phrase 'those who' can be replaced with "those students who"or
"students who".

Yes. You can.

If I replace it, will that be grammatical?

Yes. It will.

Can any native speaker please answer this?

Yes. I did.
 
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