To fine-tune a PA

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petertsui

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A PA aired at frequent intervals in the subway stations reads:

"Don't buy from illegal hawkers."

I'd rephrase it as: Don't patronize unlicensed hawkers.

Any other suggestions?

And: What's another word for "hawker"?
 

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petertsui said:
A PA aired at frequent intervals in the subway stations reads:

"Don't buy from illegal hawkers."

I'd rephrase it as: Don't patronize unlicensed hawkers.

Any other suggestions?

And: What's another word for "hawker"?

One could use "seller".
 
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