To get rid of her in-laws, who had come

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

To get rid of her in-laws, who had come on a visit on that afternoon, Maria told them she had a terrible stomach pain and a diarrhoea.
 
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Bassim said:
I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

To get rid of her in-laws, who had come [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] for a visit [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] that afternoon, Maria told them she had [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] terrible stomach pain and [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] diarrhoea.
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See above. I'm not sure how clear it is on screen, but I have deleted both indefinite articles from the second half.
 
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