try to keep a positive perspective in life.

newkeenlearner

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Which sentence is correct in terms of parallelism and punctuations?


1)But, I am optimistic, see a glass half ful, and always try to keep a positive perspective in life.

2)But, I am optimistic, and see a glass half ful, and always try to keep a positive perspective in life.


3)But, I am optimistic, I see a glass half ful, and always try to keep a positive perspective in life.
 

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'But, I am optimistic. I see a glass half full, and always try to keep a positive perspective on life.'
 

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Thank you. May I know which of my sentences is wrong?
 

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I think the corrections in post #2 suggest all of your sentences are wrong.
 

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I don't like any of them, but 3) is not too bad.
 
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