try to keep a positive perspective in life.

[newkeenlearner]

Which sentence is correct in terms of parallelism and punctuations?


1)But, I am optimistic, see a glass half ful, and always try to keep a positive perspective in life.

2)But, I am optimistic, and see a glass half ful, and always try to keep a positive perspective in life.


3)But, I am optimistic, I see a glass half ful, and always try to keep a positive perspective in life.

 

[bhaisahab]

'But, I am optimistic. I see a glass half full, and always try to keep a positive perspective on life.'

 

[newkeenlearner]

Thank you. May I know which of my sentences is wrong?

 

[Matthew Wai]

I think the corrections in post #2 suggest all of your sentences are wrong.

 

[newkeenlearner]

I think the corrections in post #2 suggest all of your sentences are wrong.

I don't think so. I think Bhaisahab just suggested the best sentences.

 

[bhaisahab]

I don't like any of them, but 3) is not too bad.