[Vocabulary] Try to relax and manage more effective and influential affairs.

coconutcove

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Is this sentence grammatically correct?

If so, how can I improve it vocabulary wise?

"Try to relax and manage more effective and influential affairs"
 
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bhaisahab

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Re: Is this sentence grammatically correct?

With correct punctuation it would be grammatical. However, its meaning is far from clear. I don't understand what you are trying to say.
 

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Re: Is this sentence grammatically correct?

Hello coconutcove, and welcome to the forum. :)

Perhaps you mean:

"Try to relax and [STRIKE]manage[/STRIKE] to focus on more [STRIKE]effective and influential[/STRIKE] important affairs."

If not, post below.
 
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