[Grammar] utilizing

hhs010120

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Hello, teachers

In the next sentence, does the underlined utilizing sound okay?

Fantasy role-playing provides an ideal environment to cultivate and test the productive use of imagination, utilizing it to enliven the fantasy narratives, and empathize with others.

I wonder if FRP utilizes imagination or people utilize imagination. If people utilize imagination, I think the underlined word should be changed into 'letting people utilize it~. What do you think?

Thanks in advance.
 
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Tarheel

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I think it is pointless to say "utilize" when you can say "use".
 
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