UV radiation.

JACEK1

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Hello all users!
Does the following sentence make sense to you?
In addition, UV radiation ought to be prevented from spreading to neighbouring stands.
or
Would it be better to say?
In addition, one should prevented UV radiation from spreading to neighbouring stands.
I am in favour of the latter version.
What do you think?
Thank you.
Context: instructions on how to perform welding work.
 

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Re: which version is acceptable to you

The second requires a bare infinitive after should. With that correction, it's better than the original.
 

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Re: which version is acceptable to you

A typo as usual.
In addition, one should prevent UV radiation from spreading to neighbouring stands.
 

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Re: which version is acceptable to you

Please note that I have changed your thread title.



'Thread titles should include all or part of the word/phrase being discussed.'
 
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