Verb "ensnare"

[Bassim]

I have tried to use "ensnare" in my sentence. I am wondering if my sentence makes sense in English. Would you please correct my mistakes?

Ensnared in the worlds of drugs and crimes, Peter struggled every day to stay alive.

 

[emsr2d2]

I have tried to use "ensnare" in my sentence. I am wondering if my sentence makes sense in English. Would you please correct my mistakes?

Ensnared in [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]worlds[/STRIKE] a world of drugs and [STRIKE]crimes[/STRIKE] crime, Peter struggled every day to stay alive.

See above. I would use "Peter struggled to stay alive every day" but your word order is not wrong.