Video for primary kids

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Ju

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I have found the videos for primary kids, Topsy and Tim'.
Are there anymore video that you recommend?

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I have found the videos for primary kids, Topsy and Tim'.
Are there anymore video that you recommend?

Thanks.

The way you have worded the first sentence makes it sound as if the children are called Topsy and Tim. I assume that's not the case. Try to change the word order.
You remembered to put a quote at the end of the title of the video but not at the start.
In your second sentence, you have used a singular instead of a plural noun.
 

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... and 'anymore' should be two words.
 
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