Vocabulary 'take into account'

[Loh Jane]

Hi English Teachers,
Are my sentences acceptable? Thanks a lot in advance.
I asked my father to lend me money for an education. However, after taking into account for years, he has not lent me.

 

[bhaisahab]

Hi English Teachers,
Are my sentences acceptable? Thanks a lot in advance.
I asked my father to lend me money for an education. However, after taking into account for years, he has not lent me.

No, the second one doesn't make a great deal of sense.

 

[englishhobby]

I asked my father to lend me money for [STRIKE]an[/STRIKE] education. However, [STRIKE]after taking into account for years,[/STRIKE] after considering the fact that it was going to take four years he [STRIKE]has[/STRIKE] did not lend me any.

Does it sound better?

 

[Rover_KE]

Much better.

That's OK.

Rover