Vocabulary 'take into account'

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Loh Jane

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Hi English Teachers,
Are my sentences acceptable? Thanks a lot in advance.
I asked my father to lend me money for an education. However, after taking into account for years, he has not lent me.
 

bhaisahab

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Hi English Teachers,
Are my sentences acceptable? Thanks a lot in advance.
I asked my father to lend me money for an education. However, after taking into account for years, he has not lent me.

No, the second one doesn't make a great deal of sense.
 

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I asked my father to lend me money for [STRIKE]an[/STRIKE] education. However, [STRIKE]after taking into account for years,[/STRIKE] after considering the fact that it was going to take four years he [STRIKE]has[/STRIKE] did not lend me any.

Does it sound better?
 

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Much better.

That's OK.

Rover
 
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