Watching Bob, dirty and dishevelled

Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct.

Watching Bob, dirty and dishevelled and sleeping under the bridges, people find it hard to believe he was once the owner of two hotels and a couple of restaurants.
 

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Watching Bob, dirty and dishevelled and sleeping (rough) under [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] bridges, people find it hard to believe he was once the (proud) owner of two hotels and a couple of restaurants.
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