[Grammar] We can join to a health club where a wide variety of facilities are offered.

[newkeenlearner]

Hi all,

May I ask check these for errors?

We can join to a health club where a wide variety of facilities are offered.
We can join to a health club which a wide variety of facilities are offered on.
We can join to a health club on which a wide variety of facilities are offered.
We can join to a health club that a wide variety of facilities are offered on.


Thanks.

 

[bhaisahab]

The first one would be OK if you deleted 'to' after 'join'. The others are incorrect.

 

[newkeenlearner]

Thanks.
How about the following?

We can join a health club where a wide variety of facilities are offered.
We can join a health club which a wide variety of facilities are offered in.
We can join a health club in which a wide variety of facilities are offered.
We can join a health club that a wide variety of facilities are offered in.

 

[teechar]

[STRIKE]May I ask[/STRIKE] Can someone please check these for errors?

We can join a health club where a wide variety of facilities are offered. [OK]
We can join a health club which a wide variety of facilities are offered in. [grammatical but not natural]
We can join a health club in which a wide variety of facilities are offered. [OK]
We can join a health club that a wide variety of facilities are offered in. [grammatical but not natural]

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[jutfrank]

I would say only the first is correct. You can't use in at all. It doesn't sound right to say in a health club.

 

[teechar]

You can't use in at all. It doesn't sound right to say in a health club.

I prefer to spend my free time in a health club than in a pub.

 

[jutfrank]

I prefer to spend my free time in a health club than in a pub.

Okay but facilities are offered in a health club?

 

[teechar]

Indeed. I would use something like "available" instead; which is why I said it was grammatical but not natural.

 

[jutfrank]

Back to square one. In the first place it should not be "facilities". The whole place is a facility. It should be "features" or "options", or "exercise routines". These are all IN the health club.

Or at the health club.