When a young teacher, Clara, arrived

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Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct.

When a young teacher, Clara, arrived in a godforsaken village, her first thought was, "Oh God, what have I done to deserve this?"
 

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Consider changing either (or both) of the indefinite articles to the definite article.
 
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