When after more than a year of being unemployed

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Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

When after more than a year of being unemployed, Gina finally found a job, both she and her husband were relieved. With only one salary, they had struggled to pay the mortgage and other bills, and their future looked bleak.
 

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

When [STRIKE]after more than a year of being unemployed,[/STRIKE] Gina finally found a job after being unemployed for over a year, both she and her husband were relieved. With only one salary, they had struggled to pay the mortgage and other bills, and their future looked bleak.
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