When David became middle-aged

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I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural.

When David became middle-aged, he complained that his parents fussed over him too much and didn't prepare him for the reality of life.
 

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...his parents had fussed over him too much and hadn't prepared him...
 

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When David reached middle age, ...
 
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