When David's father died

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

When David's father died, it felt like an emptiness that nothing could fill. Not a day passed without David reminiscing about the time they spent together.
 
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Bassim said:
I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

When David's father died, [STRIKE]it[/STRIKE] he felt [STRIKE]like[/STRIKE] an emptiness that nothing could fill. Not a day passed without David reminiscing about the time they spent together.
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