When I fell ill I was left with no flexibility in my spine. I couldn't twist my torso

tufguy

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When I fell ill I was left with no flexibility in my spine. I couldn't twist my torso at all.

Please check my sentences.
 

emsr2d2

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When I fell ill, I was left with no flexibility in my spine. I couldn't twist my torso at all.

Please check my sentences.

See above. Other than needing a comma, the rest is OK.
 
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