When Maria grew up, she

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I am not sure if my sentence sounds natural. Would you please correct my mistakes? Is it correct to write "went on the quest to"?

When Maria grew up, she went on a quest to find her father, who had left her mother when Maria was just two years old.
 
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The definite article is only possible if this quest has previously been discussed. The rest of the sentence is OK.
 
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I presume you know how to correct it, Bassim. ;-)
 
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