When Peter returned home late in the evening

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Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

When Peter returned home late in the evening, tipsy and stinking of alcohol, and saw his wife standing in the kitchen, he knew what was going to happen next: her long telling-off and pontificating until he dropped off to sleep.
 

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That's good, but you might try:

reeking of alcohol
 
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