[General] When the Creature falls the ground opens wide to form the gorge

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Marina Gaidar

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Does it sound normal "When the Creature falls the ground opens wide to form the gorge"? It is still from my fantastic text, so don't pay attention to how strange the context is.
 
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Marina Gaidar said:
Does it sound normal "When the Creature falls, the ground opens wide to form the gorge"? It is still from my fantastic text, so don't pay attention to how strange the context is.
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It's OK with the comma.
 
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