Whenever Diana watched children play

Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

Whenever Diana watched children play, pain swept through her. When she was a child, her parents worked so hard, they never had time to play with her.
 

Rover_KE

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I'd delete the commas in the second sentence.
 
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