Which of the sentences is acceptable to you?

[JACEK1]

Hello.


Which of the sentences is acceptable to you? (Maybe neither of them).


In March, three bulk carriers belonging to Polish Steamship Company will start to be repaired simultaneously at ABC Shipyard./ In March, repair work will start (to be done), at the same time, on three bulk carriers belonging to Polish Steamship Company at ABC Shipyard.


The general idea is that "In March (of this year), repair work on/to three bulk carriers belonging to Polish Steamship Company will start simultaneously at ABC Shipyard.


What do you think?


Thank you.

 

[teechar]

In March, three bulk carriers belonging to the Polish Steamship Company will start [STRIKE]to be[/STRIKE] getting repaired simultaneously at ABC Shipyard.

In March, repair work will start [STRIKE](to be done)[/STRIKE], at the same time, on three bulk carriers belonging to the Polish Steamship Company at ABC Shipyard.

Try:

Repair work on three bulk carriers belonging to the Polish Steamship Company will start in March at (the) ABC Shipyard.