Which one is best?

[angel-girl1]

Hi,

Please, which one is best?


Information is not only shared by media conglomerate, but it is aslo shared by ordinary people through social networking sites,


Information is not only shared by media conglomerate but by ordinary people aslo through social networking sites.


Thanks.

 

[Raymott]

Hi,

Please, which one is best?


Information is not only shared by media conglomerate, but it is aslo shared by ordinary people through social networking sites,


Information is shared not only by media conglomerates but also by ordinary people [STRIKE]aslo [/STRIKE]through social networking sites.


Thanks.

The second. That's how I'd say it. "... not only by X ... but also by Y". Of course, there are other ways of doing it.