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- Aug 29, 2014
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- Student or Learner
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- Japanese
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- Japan
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- United States
"While lab manager of the School of Engineering, I was a~" Is the phrase correct?
An editor revised my writing from "During my service as a lab manager of the School of Engineering, I was..." into "while lab manager of the School of Engineering, I was...". Is this grammatically correct?
An editor revised my writing from "During my service as a lab manager of the School of Engineering, I was..." into "while lab manager of the School of Engineering, I was...". Is this grammatically correct?