While the plain-clothes police were keeping

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Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

While the plain-clothes police were keeping a close eye on an infamous criminal's flat, Bob, a local gangster, robbed a betting shop right under their noses. He almost yielded to temptation to take a selfie with the police's BMW.
 

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I like the story. I think I'd say, He almost yielded to the temptation of taking a selfie with the police's BMW. Or, He almost yielded to temptation by taking a selfie with the police's BMW.
 

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Bassim, I added an afterthought to my post but you had already liked it.
 
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