With the development of its - Which is grammatically right?

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sahanav

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With the development of its - next generation- mega pixel IP camera, Zed Security Systems has introduced cameras that are specifically designed for high performance in extreme low-light conditions.

With the development of its next generation of mega pixel IP camera, Zed Security Systems has introduced cameras that are specifically designed for high performance in extreme low-light conditions.

Which is grammatically right? I think the first one, as next generation is added information - please help.

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I prefer the second option.
 

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To me they are both wrong.

It should read "next-generation megapixel IP camera."
 
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