Within a year, Bob almost gambled

Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

Within a year, Bob almost gambled his entire inheritance away. His acquaintances couldn't believe their eyes when they saw him in rags queuing at a food bank.
 

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

Within a year, Bob had almost gambled his entire inheritance away. His acquaintances couldn't believe their eyes when they saw him in rags queuing at a food bank.
Bhai.
 
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I would put a comma after "rags."
 
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