Won't you, please?

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Nightmare85

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Hello,
I heard that on a TV show (The Simpsons) some minutes ago :
I wanna live, Marge!
Won't you let me live?
Won't you, please?


Wouldn't be it better to replace the 3rd sentence by this one:
Will you, please?

And could it be possible that there are 4 sentences, not 3?
I wanna live, Marge!
Won't you let me live?

Won't you?
Please!
:?:

If you need more context, here you go:
YouTube - live.avi (08 seconds).

Cheers!
 

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Hello,
I heard the following on a TV show (The Simpsons) some minutes ago :
I wanna live, Marge!
Won't you let me live?
Won't you, please?


Wouldn't be it better to replace the 3rd sentence by this one:
Will you, please? No, the third sentence is fine as is.

And could it be possible to have 4 sentences, not 3?
I wanna live, Marge!
Won't you let me live?

Won't you?
Please!
:?:
It's possible, but there is no need to separate the third sentence into two parts.
If you need more context, here you go:
YouTube - live.avi (08 seconds).

Cheers!
2006
 
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