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aleycris
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Hello, it's me again. Now I wrote a argumentative composition.
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Alejandro
Argumentative composition on the following topic:
Sending criminals to prison is a complete waste of time.
The crimes are growing every day in our city. Most of the criminals are not caught by the police, and the rest of then are sent to the prison.
To a certain extent, it is true that the criminals are sent to prison in order to be punished for their crimes. Some prisons are trying to re educate the prisoners to make them better persons.
On the other hand, the prisoners do not spend enough time in prison because there are few law that reduce their sentences. The main law is two per one, so if a criminal was sentence for 10 year, with this law the will only stay 5 years. Apart from that if the prisoner have a good conduct or perform, the sentence would be reduced more, so the criminal do not stay at prison enough time to be re educate.
Unfortunately, law are not equals for every person, so if you have a power you probably would not go to prison or you would stay few days. For this reason, sending criminal to prison is a waste of time because in few hours or days they would be free and they would make crimes again.
What do you thing about this?
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Alejandro