bosun
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 9, 2005
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- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Korean
- Home Country
- South Korea
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- South Korea
When a writing teacher gives written feedback to students' papers, can I write as follows?
1. Your papers lacks focus and coherence. Please reorganize your ideas so that your reader can follow your ideas.
2. There are too many awkward and ungrammatical sentences in your paper.
Reread and correct all the mistakes marked in your paper.
1. Your papers lacks focus and coherence. Please reorganize your ideas so that your reader can follow your ideas.
2. There are too many awkward and ungrammatical sentences in your paper.
Reread and correct all the mistakes marked in your paper.