[Idiom] written record

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Will17

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Hello,


Is the phrase " written record" correct here ,please?

"Please, send me an email because I want to have a written record confirming what we said".


Thanks a lot
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Yes, but you don't need a comma after 'please'.

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You don't have to say "confirming" either.

Please send me an email so I have a written record of what we said.

Depending on the context, it might be more appropriate to end with "... a written record of what we agreed" or "... a written record of what you are offering" or similar.
 
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